Title: Possesion [2/?]
Author: Sparrow
Genre: Anime, One Piece
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I don't own 'One Piece' and I am currently trying to watch more of the anime, I'm only up to episode 67, so please forgive me if some of the characters seem a little OOC. Also, feedback is muchos appreciated, any comments, flames or great suggestions I will take into consideration. Also, this happens before they go down Reverse Mountain and into the Grand Line. :D
Author Note: In Part two, near the end there's a little bit there about keeping out of the way. I just wish to give credit to Dyce who has sucha wonderful fic on men keeping out of the way of women during her monthly hunting for chocolate for three days. So kudos to Dyce. I have modified my keeping out of the way, but Dyce was the inspiration. Look for her page [Dyce's Corner], it's mostly on X-Men fanfiction, but truly great masterpieces.
Summary: Luffy is in trouble when he is captured by a woman called Belladonna. Shanks, along with the Straw Hat Pirate crew have to go and rescue Luffy.
( Possession [2/?] )
Author: Sparrow
Genre: Anime, One Piece
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I don't own 'One Piece' and I am currently trying to watch more of the anime, I'm only up to episode 67, so please forgive me if some of the characters seem a little OOC. Also, feedback is muchos appreciated, any comments, flames or great suggestions I will take into consideration. Also, this happens before they go down Reverse Mountain and into the Grand Line. :D
Author Note: In Part two, near the end there's a little bit there about keeping out of the way. I just wish to give credit to Dyce who has sucha wonderful fic on men keeping out of the way of women during her monthly hunting for chocolate for three days. So kudos to Dyce. I have modified my keeping out of the way, but Dyce was the inspiration. Look for her page [Dyce's Corner], it's mostly on X-Men fanfiction, but truly great masterpieces.
Summary: Luffy is in trouble when he is captured by a woman called Belladonna. Shanks, along with the Straw Hat Pirate crew have to go and rescue Luffy.
( Possession [2/?] )
Title: Possession [1/?]
Author: Sparrow
Genre: Anime, One Piece
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I don't own 'One Piece' and I am currently trying to watch more of the anime, I'm only up to episode 67, so please forgive me if some of the characters seem a little OOC. Also, feedback is muchos appreciated, any comments, flames or great suggestions I will take into consideration. Also, this happens before they go down Reverse Mountain and into the Grand Line. :D
Author Note: I have revised chapter 1, yay! *throws confetti in the air* I hope you like some of the minor changes. I plan on having chapter two on getting the crew healed up and going towards Belladonna. I also plan for chapter 3 to be in Luffy's POV and his thoughts on what's happening to him. So enjoy and thank you all for the lovely reviews and critisim. And I realise that Nami's account of what happenend is still too long, but I added some stuff, like breathing, some sniffling, weak laughs, in hopes that is does break it up somehow. Also, might make the story PG-13 as the story continues on. Also, I hope to portray the characters to the best of their personality. Any pointing out in inconsistances will be helpfull. Also, with the review page, it is not my intention to decieve you in believing there is a new chapter, but I am mearly replying to all of the wonderful people who have review. They deserve it. :) And the author notes page, it just to let you people know of any changes that might occur.
Summary: Luffy is in trouble when he is captured by a woman called Belladonna. Shanks, along with the Straw Hat Pirate crew have to go and rescue Luffy.
( Possession [1/?] )
Author: Sparrow
Genre: Anime, One Piece
Rating: FR13
Disclaimer: I don't own 'One Piece' and I am currently trying to watch more of the anime, I'm only up to episode 67, so please forgive me if some of the characters seem a little OOC. Also, feedback is muchos appreciated, any comments, flames or great suggestions I will take into consideration. Also, this happens before they go down Reverse Mountain and into the Grand Line. :D
Author Note: I have revised chapter 1, yay! *throws confetti in the air* I hope you like some of the minor changes. I plan on having chapter two on getting the crew healed up and going towards Belladonna. I also plan for chapter 3 to be in Luffy's POV and his thoughts on what's happening to him. So enjoy and thank you all for the lovely reviews and critisim. And I realise that Nami's account of what happenend is still too long, but I added some stuff, like breathing, some sniffling, weak laughs, in hopes that is does break it up somehow. Also, might make the story PG-13 as the story continues on. Also, I hope to portray the characters to the best of their personality. Any pointing out in inconsistances will be helpfull. Also, with the review page, it is not my intention to decieve you in believing there is a new chapter, but I am mearly replying to all of the wonderful people who have review. They deserve it. :) And the author notes page, it just to let you people know of any changes that might occur.
Summary: Luffy is in trouble when he is captured by a woman called Belladonna. Shanks, along with the Straw Hat Pirate crew have to go and rescue Luffy.
( Possession [1/?] )