Nice! I think it's awesome. It all flows together well, and you portray all the characters perfectly. :D
Yeah, just cuz not much else has actually happened to him to cause it... :P Not sure why being vampire-ized would make someone taller, but who knows what's acceptable and all in this storyline. :P
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Date: 2011-10-17 05:08 am (UTC)Yeah, just cuz not much else has actually happened to him to cause it... :P Not sure why being vampire-ized would make someone taller, but who knows what's acceptable and all in this storyline. :P